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[Music] Sorrow (My own song)

Post  Smurfje on Sun May 27, 2007 6:28 pm

I recorded my song while I was playing it with my musicclass in my school. The first 15 seconds don't belong to my song, that's just a little bit mess because nobody realised that I was recording. XD

Also, the qualitiy of the recording is very bad, but please wait until you hear my chorus. Very Happy I love that part! <3

Special thanks to Marina, who sings my song, and to Vivian who sings the second voice in the chorus. (You almost don't hear Vivian, but she sings "Woooooooo".)

To hear my song, please click on the link below. Then, please click three times on volgende pagina and then on download rec012.wav

Download REC012.WAV

Lyrics:

Sorrow

Intro
Untie me
Release me
And free me
Please save me

Why this sorrow

Verse
When the wind blows
I can feel your presence
Near me
Floating through air,
Solid rocks stones and sea
Near me
Water falls when you are crying
Feels like dying

Chorus
Tell me, tell me
Why am I feeling lonely
Why am I incomplete and
Why do I miss you every
Heartbeat
2x

Verse
Fire burns when
You are dancing with flames
Joyfully
You are laughing
How I want to laugh too
Joyfully
The earth cheers when you're smiling
Feels like flying

Chorus
Tell me, tell me
Why am I feeling lonely
Why am I incomplete and
Why do I miss you every
Heartbeat
2x

Intermezzo (Only music)

Chorus
Tell me, tell me
Why am I feeling lonely
Why am I incomplete and
Why do I miss you every
Heartbeat
2x


Please be honest with me and tell me what you think about my song. I am the worst in my music class, so I am prepared for you comments. T.T
By the way, it's me who plays the piano.
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Post  Tohru on Mon May 28, 2007 2:53 pm

It's really good. cheers Did you made this? It's like OMG! You should be very proud at yourself. Very Happy

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Re: [Music] Sorrow (My own song)

Post  Nyuka on Mon May 28, 2007 2:59 pm

It's really good. ^__^

I love the chorus. The chorus before the intermezzo is the best to hear.
Too bad the recording is so messed up, but it sounds really good.

Did you just write the lyrics or the piano etc. as well?

(I love. It somehow reminds me of something 'wiccan-like'. The lyrics.)

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Post  Smurfje on Thu May 31, 2007 11:34 am

Nyuka wrote:It's really good. ^__^

I love the chorus. The chorus before the intermezzo is the best to hear.
Too bad the recording is so messed up, but it sounds really good.

Did you just write the lyrics or the piano etc. as well?

(I love. It somehow reminds me of something 'wiccan-like'. The lyrics.)

I wrote everything, that was meaning of the last exam of music^^ You had to write a whole song by yourself (which was pretty hard to do, I can assure you). I took me like one month or so to make this song XD
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Post  Nyuka on Thu May 31, 2007 11:49 am

Smurfje wrote:
I wrote everything, that was meaning of the last exam of music^^ You had to write a whole song by yourself (which was pretty hard to do, I can assure you). I took me like one month or so to make this song XD
You did good right?
That's why I didn't choose music. XD I love playing guitar, don't get me wrong, and I love making songs/lyrics/poems/stories.

But... Writing an entire song on the guitar is still too hard for me, I've just begun!

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Re: [Music] Sorrow (My own song)

Post  Noah on Thu May 31, 2007 5:24 pm

I don't understand why Hollywood hasn't discovered you yet. Cool

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Re: [Music] Sorrow (My own song)

Post  Nyuka on Thu May 31, 2007 6:12 pm

Haha, Hollywood? XD Lol.

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Post  Smurfje on Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:15 pm

Noah wrote:I don't understand why Hollywood hasn't discovered you yet. Cool

Haha, that's a joke, right? o__0

Don't get me wrong, I love my song, but I don't think it'll be populair with the crowd. ^_^ I mean, everybody listens these days to that yo-yo-yo-pop-music, right? ^_^
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Post  Nyuka on Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:17 pm

*shivers*

I hate that music. O_O Well, most of it. Some is nice.
I listen to all kinds of music, mostly JRock and even so I like the song. ^_^

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Post  Smurfje on Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:27 pm

Do you perhaps know a Japanese band which is not so... Uhm, rocky? Very Happy
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Post  Nyuka on Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:36 pm

Smurfje wrote:Do you perhaps know a Japanese band which is not so...uhm, rocky? Very Happy

You could always listen to solo artists. Miyavi, Ayumi Hamasaki, Utada Hikaru. (She sings so beautifully for example: Colors)

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Re: [Music] Sorrow (My own song)

Post  Smurfje on Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:21 pm

Nyuka wrote:
Smurfje wrote:Do you perhaps know a Japanese band which is not so...uhm, rocky? Very Happy

You could always listen to solo artists. Miyavi, Ayumi Hamasaki, Utada Hikaru. (She sings so beautifully for example: Colors)

I'll download it! ^^
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Post  Nyuka on Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:38 pm

And, have you yet? I have it on my comp so. ^^

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Post  Smurfje on Fri Jun 29, 2007 5:27 pm

Nyuka wrote:And, have you yet? I have it on my comp so. ^^

I did. ^^ It's a bit weird isn't it? Weird, but nice. ^^
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Post  Nyuka on Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:27 pm

Whom did you download?

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Post  Noah on Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:17 pm

Ayumi Hamasaki? I know her! You can dress her at stardoll.com. (Which I thought was cool, 'cause she's cool to dress!) Maybe I should try to download some music of her too.

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Post  Nyuka on Sat Jun 30, 2007 4:51 pm

You said that before I think. <_< Stardoll...

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