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Contest of June

Post  Tohru on Fri Jun 08, 2007 3:23 pm

During this contest you'll have to make a poem.

Subject: The fighting between Yuki and Kyo.

The list of competitors:
1. Nyuka
2. Noah
3. Smurfje
4. Genii
5. tezmaniac

At June 22th this topic will be closed and I'll read your poems and pick up the best. Smile

Post your poem here. If I see that you've used the poems which are already posted, you're qualified.

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Re: Contest of June

Post  Tohru on Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:46 pm

Only 7 days to go...

Don't forget to post your poem. Smile

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Re: Contest of June

Post  Smurfje on Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:02 pm

I'm working on it; I am working on it! It's kind of hard to make a good poem, you know. Wink
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Re: Contest of June

Post  Nyuka on Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:09 pm

Only two more days.. I should work a bit harder as well. ^o^'l
Well, shouldn't you be opening a topic for the poems?

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Re: Contest of June

Post  Nyuka on Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:15 pm

I really hope everybody likes it! I wasn't sure if it had to be a real badass painful battle. XD But I made this in like... one minute. *for real* The words just came flowing onto paper and I thought it'd be sad to erase those words.


Admiration Strikes

Another strike of admiration

Secretly

Your fist hits him hard and you know why

It scares you

Because he understands so well

That pain

Silent understanding

Another hit – and it hurts

You

This time

You lose – again

The materialistic battle

But the battle of pain

Can never be won

For you understand each other

So well

The last hit –

Another strike of admiration








Author: Nyuka~sama
The spaces between the senteces belong there, don't change them please. It'll change the atmosphere of the poem.

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Re: Contest of June

Post  Smurfje on Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:17 am

Nyuka wrote:Only two more days.. I should work a bit harder as well ^o^'l

Ah, you can't rush art, Nyuka~san!
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Re: Contest of June

Post  Noah on Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:39 am

Now Noah-san will do her best and amaze and shock the world with her incredible poem!

Title: 'Kyo's dream'

I hit you with my right leg
I hit you with a left fist
I hit you with my bag
And you get even more pissed

I hit you one more time
I laugh loudly
I imagine you don't feel fine
While you die soundly

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Re: Contest of June

Post  Smurfje on Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:23 pm

I guess it's my turn now. ^^ Please don't be harsh on me, I am not really into writing poems. T.T

Addicted

Yuki and Kyo
Fighting each other
Hating each other ‘till death

And they’ll be fighting
fighting and fighting
Until the very last breath

Yet there is something
Beneath the surface
That no one easily sees

And they can deny it
They will deny it
So there never will be peace

But listen to what
I tell you here
There’s love between these two men

That’s why I hate them,
‘cause they make me addicted
To that bloody Yaoi again
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Re: Contest of June

Post  Tohru on Fri Jun 22, 2007 11:48 am

Nyuka wrote:Well, shouldn't you be opening a topic for the poems?

Maybe you should read the first post of this topic again. Specially:

Post your poem here.

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Re: Contest of June

Post  Tohru on Fri Jun 22, 2007 11:55 am

I haven't seen the poems of Genii and tezmaniac but well.. It's June 22th so I have to close this topic.

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